Every new generation of poets seeks to build on that which was before and push boundaries of language, metaphor and meaning. As a lover of more “classic” poets to whom we all look for guidance and inspiration, but who struggles to say things in new and fresh ways, I’ve had a love-hate affair with the beautiful pretentions of contemporary verse. Perhaps there is just too much genius for me to capture. Perhaps I am destined to speak in an older voice with newer words? Perhaps I need greater patience to see what is ever before me? I ask here some questions in verse.
a medicine cabinet
stuffed with placebo
a closet full of clever
a basket of plastic apples
half-eaten, half-observed
spit back out where they too
become poetry
Hermes has a message
but his feet are raw
from too much slogging
in circles through the plumage
of the self-engrossed
t.s. eliot squints from
the writing chair
he’s but the worn-out scrivener
too tired to interrupt
from his tidy perch
hidden beneath our dust
and pretention
dickinson donne blake and hopkins sprawl
themselves out prominently
under the african violet
on some coffee table
but with coffee-stained faces
that sag bored from hearing
glorified journal entries
too minute for verse
was it williams’ red wheelbarrow
or mary’s kingfisher
or a d. h. lawrence butterfly
or even the silence of e. e.
that first whispered
‘folly’?
was it too many commas
and too little rhyme
to make something live?
did the truth live among the
dreaming gemstones
where words give birth
to flight?
or maybe those words
were bled from the same
shaky pens
leaching the heart
of day-starved paper still
straining to see?
“Glorified journal entries” Ouch! But, yes, I feel similar although a few ‘moderns’ have managed to get under my skin and nestle alongside Donne and Blake.
… and forgot to say I really loved this poem.
Seymour, here’s the thing – I actually adore so much of it. It inspires me. At times, however, it can feel like it giggles at its own cleverness, pointing us back toward itself in an effort to say “my, my, look how far I’m pushing convention…there, do you see?”
I know so little, really. And some times, gasp, I just don’t understand, no matter how long I stare at the words and wait for enlightenment. Reminds me of a poem I just wrote which I will copy here because it is so wonderful I must share it… ha, just joking!!! Love your wit, Rob.